Yes, call things by their names, talk to one another and care for one another. Your essay goes right to the heart of things, as does your poem. It’s heartbreaking, and it’s truth telling, as we must do for ourselves as well as each other. Thank you, Valerie for sharing this.
Dear Valerie
That poem broke my heart as the dish broke . Beastly experience ..
much love Kathleen
Thanks, Kathleen! I appreciate your comments-
Yes, call things by their names, talk to one another and care for one another. Your essay goes right to the heart of things, as does your poem. It’s heartbreaking, and it’s truth telling, as we must do for ourselves as well as each other. Thank you, Valerie for sharing this.
I appreciate these comments, Susannah- and your close reading.
At first I thought it was unfinished, which made it all the more wrenching. Hugs!
I love that you experienced that abruptness- it was what I was trying to do in the poem.
Powerful, and, beautifully done - both versions!
Thanks for commenting, Bob- Hope you’re well!